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Topic-icon Really like the portrait thingy. :)

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3 years 3 months ago - 3 years 3 months ago #2712 by caenissnow
caenissnow created the topic: Really like the portrait thingy. :)
Not sure where to put this, but I wanted to let you guys know, I really like the sketch portrait thingy. :) I finished writing my first book and am already on chapter 9 in the sequel and because these are like EPICLY HUGE stories with tons of characters I love being able to make them and "see" them. :D I hope you'll continue to add more choices to it.
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3 years 3 months ago - 3 years 3 months ago #2714 by Fasoldgames
Fasoldgames replied the topic: not sure where to put this
Very nice, he looks quite heroic!

Could you perhaps tell something about the books you are writing? I'm always very interested in the writing process, and fantasy!

In regard to the title of the topic, you could make a topic like 'Caenissnow's Characters', or 'Caenissnow's Stories' or something like that, to keep us posted about your work :)
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3 years 3 months ago #2715 by caenissnow
caenissnow replied the topic: not sure where to put this
:D Thanks! OKies. I'll do that.

Well the book is rather long.... It's a bit um... adult in nature (erotic at times). It's a story about a young slave woman living on another world. On the continent she lives on, humanity is dying out due to a genetic defect, and when her master is killed, she has to learn how to survive there without him.... There's no magic, no elves, no vampires, just a lot of fighting, swords, kings, assassins, soldiers, including a man who's conquering everything and ruling all with a powerful drug. There's obsession, devotion, love, and lust... And it's really long... Started it in 2011. FInished it about a month ago. Letting it sit aside while my daughter and my best friend read it through first, before going back and checking again for typos and then I'm gonna hopefully get brave enough to put it up on Amazon. The final total number of words is about 325,979. :P It got really complicated. :D

Currently working on the sequel. Already at chapter 9.

I've been writing stories for myself since I was eight years old, but I never wrote anything this huge before and it's very scary imagining what others will think of it. :P

Anyway, yeah... Again, I really like the portrait drawing tool. :D I will have to put in a request for sideburns though.... :D And more hair and facial hair.... and ah... pretty much everything. :D

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3 years 3 months ago #2718 by Fasoldgames
Fasoldgames replied the topic: not sure where to put this
Sounds interesting! I like science-fiction quite a bit, as well as the dystopian future / other world :)
And I think adult themes definitely add to the flavor ;)

I was always kind of bad at writing erotic scenes though, I tried, but my adult scenes seemed more....humorous... than wildly erotic :)

Anyway, it sound interesting, and I would really like to take a look at it when its
on Amazon!

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3 years 3 months ago #2723 by caenissnow
caenissnow replied the topic: not sure where to put this
Cool! :)

Yeah... I just have to get brave enough... It's such a scary thing. I've written for myself forever. Writing something others might read.... makes me nervous. :D

Here's just a little piece... from the prologue (the formatting changed when I pasted it... hopefully it's still readable. The spoiler tag is kinda weird colored.):

Warning: Spoiler! [ Click to expand ]

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3 years 3 months ago #2729 by Fasoldgames
Fasoldgames replied the topic: not sure where to put this
An interesting scene!

I have some observations, if you don't mind :)

The action is smooth and uncluttered, in my opinion, without too many side-events or dialogs or overly long descriptions you see in some fantasy books, and it is quite intense, I found myself reading with excitement! Also, the war song thing, and how it changes, feels nicely fresh and new.

I did see some small things to be corrected, like putting on clothes, instead of pulling on clothes, and the mentioning of 'basin', the cave floor was not before described as a basin, so that gave me a moments pause.

But for the rest, I really liked it!

And I have been there too, showing your work to others, it is scary indeed :) But you get used to it, and, as the saying goes : Fortune favors the bold! :)

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